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Alright. This is an old drawing, and I don't particularly like it. It's great that you're all willing to give feedback and I really appreciate it, but as I said, it's old. Really old. And I'm not really looking for that anymore. Thanks.

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~Aryante Nov 23, 2005, 1:56:01 PM
I love the poofle-bit of the dress. =D

I think what's making it look 'not quite right' are the legs and torso. The calves should be more pronounced...And the waist and stomach seem too be too long.

Overall, this is really pretty. ^-^ Keep the designing up!

I hope I could be of some help or that I'm not just blathering. o.o;
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~urwesleyb Nov 23, 2005, 7:55:34 PM
I think the hips might be a bit off... that's it, I think.

Very good! :D

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♪{bleaching your teeth, smiling flash, talking trash, under your breath}♪
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~xiaocaca Nov 24, 2005, 5:37:56 AM
Your comment is very helpful! Don't worry, you're not blathering.... Thanks for the advice! :)
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~Aryante Nov 24, 2005, 5:39:30 AM
No problem. xD Glad to help.
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~KwazyKandyPie Nov 27, 2005, 6:20:51 AM
...you're kidding me. it's beautiful! i love the outfit. whah, if only it was real. the skirt is so UNIQUE. Her pose is great, too. simply awesome! :D :)

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~xiaocaca Nov 28, 2005, 1:03:52 PM
Aww gee, thanks.... :)
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~beautifulcutter Nov 28, 2005, 10:34:13 PM
I think it's gorgeous, but I agree that the calves are what probably makes it look a little off. And for some reason I think the shoes are too boxy. I don't think the hips look wrong though, or the thighs. I think everything else is great. And the dress is awesome.

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I guess no one's really got it all together, huh? I feel like I should welcome you to the neighborhood or something.
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~Starcrozz Nov 30, 2005, 10:54:07 AM
Her hips are gorgeous. However, she seems to be missing a couple of ribs. The foreshortning on the right arm couldn't be more perfect, but there is something weird with the left one. At the elbow. Her legs are a bit off-balanced, but I think enough people have commented on those already. :) Overall it is very good and I like the simple, yet good design on her dress. I tried one almost like that today, but that one had a corset.

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"Calm down Rifas! It's just a snail!"
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~Tearstains Nov 30, 2005, 11:45:13 PM
A helpful hint in measuring people is that if you were to stretch your arms out to the sides, that length would be how tall you are. Wierd huh? I know that with her arms bent its hard to tell, but you could guess-timate it fairly easy. If your trying to get this into realistic measurments her legs are really long in comparison to her body. But for a fashion sketch I think it looks neat for things to be exagerated.
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